Week 9a

Today in class we went over our first half of the animation. I got some critique which I plan on fixing. My critique was that I should change the destruction scene so there is more puffiness to the clouds, change the farmer so he isn't a silhouette, and keep the flames moving when the scene is transitioning. Also, Professor Pannafino thought it would be better to have the opening title with cut paper words instead of chalk and I agree, so I am going to change that later.

In class I cut out all the letters:

Later I took out the farmer and just had two sheep:

I will have to refilm almost all of my scenes, which I will try to have done by Wednesday.