Here are the comments I received during critique:
- Strength is in the details
- Elements are consistent
- Made changes that were recommended in previous class sessions
- During the "next spring" scene, it would've been nice to have the letters reflect spring. Maybe they could be green with floral aspects to emphasize the point.
- Change Persephone's arm so it is laying by her side at the end.
- Readability is compromised a little by having the constellation behind Taurus at the end.
- Worked well rhythmically.
- Story was easy to follow.
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