Today in class we further discussed our ideas and I got more feedback since I was one of the few who received less feedback on D2L. I got several new ideas and took some notes. Here are some of the ideas:
- The character gets up, puts on clothes, and gets back in bed using jump cuts to separate events.
- Any phrases used could be in a dreamlike or pillowy typeface or could appear as though the character was dreaming about them.
- The person could fall asleep at desk, zoom out to reveal a whole office building/school of people napping.
- The character could spin around in an office chair to reveal them asleep.
- The person could wake up to set the clock, then cut to them at work falling asleep.
Out of all of these suggestions, I like the last one the best. I think it would be doable and get the point across. My new storyline is basically that the character gets up to turn the clock ahead, gets ready for work, and then at work takes out their pillow to take a nap. Then, a dream bubble will appear above them saying something like "Happy National Napping Day".
For next class we have to begin our sketches, so with this idea in mind I think I am ready to move forward.